The state of students argumentative writing: An ai-assisted qualitative inquiry into the implementation of a toulmin-based teaching model

Farous Izwan Abdul Aziz and Jason Miin-Hwa Lim and Seriaznita Mat Said (2024) The state of students argumentative writing: An ai-assisted qualitative inquiry into the implementation of a toulmin-based teaching model. In: 8th International Conference on Education, Business, Islamic and Technology 2024 & Systematic Literature Review Workshop (8th ICEBIT 2024 & SLR WORKSHOP), 30 November - 01 December 2024, Dorsett Hotel, Putrajaya, Malaysia.

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Abstract

Students in Malaysia. As these students are only introduced to the genre in their upper secondary years, they encounter challenges due to the complexity of the discourse, which persists even at the tertiary level. This study aims to investigate whether the implementation of a Toulmin-based teaching model could improve the students’ argumentative writing skills. By analysing degree-level students’ essay samples, the researchers attempted to highlight the common weaknesses of the students so as to indicate how a Toulmin-based writing model could be rightly used as a pedagogical tool. Essay samples provided by 76 undergraduate ESL students from a public university were analysed to identify the presence of Toulmin’s argumentative elements while a rubric was used to review their organisation, content and language skills. Our findings show that students were able to aptly present a basic argumentative structure even though they still struggled with relatively advanced components. Despite the students’ ability to present a clear structure, their essays lacked depth, supporting evidence and explicit logical links. Apart from showing signs of plagiarism, the students also exhibited weaknesses in organisation, grammar, vocabulary and translation competency. The results show that a structured argumentative writing framework is needed to help students improve their writing abilities via a set of critical thinking skills, particularly in the process of composing increasingly sophisticated arguments.

Item Type: Conference or Workshop Item (Other)
Keyword: English second language, Argumentative writing, Toulmin’s model
Subjects: B Philosophy. Psychology. Religion > BC Logic > BC1-199 Logic > BC171-199 Special topics
P Language and Literature > PE English language > PE1-3729 English > PE1001-1693 Modern English
Department: CENTRE > Centre for the Promotion of Knowledge and Language Learning
Depositing User: JUNAINE JASNI -
Date Deposited: 08 Aug 2025 15:18
Last Modified: 08 Aug 2025 15:18
URI: https://eprints.ums.edu.my/id/eprint/44738

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